Post by Deleted on Dec 27, 2007 19:32:07 GMT -5
This is the start of a short story i am writing ATM, please tell me what you think...any spelling mistakes....grammatical errors.....etc.
Here it is:
Julie sat down, defeated, on the large hard chair that she had decided to place, for reasons forgotten to her now, at the foot of her bed, she looked out the now frosted window out into the bleak yard outside, it had been snowing for almost a month now and it was starting to take it's toll on Julie's sanity, Julie had always been the quiet girl in her dorm, but this seemingly endless winter had made her feel hollow,
Here it is:
Julie sat down, defeated, on the large hard chair that she had decided to place, for reasons forgotten to her now, at the foot of her bed, she looked out the now frosted window out into the bleak yard outside, it had been snowing for almost a month now and it was starting to take it's toll on Julie's sanity, Julie had always been the quiet girl in her dorm, but this seemingly endless winter had made her feel hollow,
